Well done! You dressed professional. Your speech was engaging; it is clear that you put effort in creating a hook to gain the listener's attention. Honestly, I think you did a better job speaking than I did in my elevator pitch. However, I did have to laugh that you had the fan going. Dr. Pryor mentioned in class how (because it is in the hot days of summer) students will often have the fan going above their heads. In real life, or rather in an elevator, a fan wouldn't be noticed, but since we have to use video technology to complete these assignments these issues arise. While I was listening to your engaging words, I couldn't help but stare at the fan! Minor distraction!!
Overall, I think you did a great job. Best Regards, Suzanna
Great hook, the story grabs my attention. The statistical data you included in your pitch makes it clear that you know what you’re talking about, which entices the person to whom you are pitching to pay attention and seriously consider your proposition. I like that you are building off the future electric vehicle market with an alternative service not yet out there. This service will help to mitigate the learning curve in electric cars for families and seniors who are worried about the unknown, that is, the differences between the cars they’ve been driving with for decades and the new wave of electric or self-driving cars that are unfamiliar at this point in time.
Great post! Your speaking behavior and the content was very professional and I really enjoyed to watch this video. I liked you chose electric vehicle as the topic because electric vehicle industry is on a roll and your presentation was very convincing. I did my elevator pitch but it was hard to act like there's audience in front of me which you did well.
Incredible job on your pitch! I believe that you chose a very promising market and need for your business model. In regards to your performance, you came across very professional and eloquent. I have a lot of trouble keeping my pitches fluid and natural, but you did a great job! I really enjoyed watching your video.
Hi Arthur, Your post was excellent about the gas product. I like that you want to give the information to the buyers. You were very calm and reliable in the argument. Don't be that never next time. Great work.
Hi Arthur, I liked how from the beginning you grabbed everyone's attention bby speaking on how the average individual could save money. What I did notice, though, was that you were speaking very fast. Nonethless, it was obvious that you were very confident with your idea and that is one of the most important aspects of a pitch. You were very persuasive with your approach almost like the perfect salesman.
Arthur,
ReplyDeleteWell done! You dressed professional. Your speech was engaging; it is clear that you put effort in creating a hook to gain the listener's attention. Honestly, I think you did a better job speaking than I did in my elevator pitch. However, I did have to laugh that you had the fan going. Dr. Pryor mentioned in class how (because it is in the hot days of summer) students will often have the fan going above their heads. In real life, or rather in an elevator, a fan wouldn't be noticed, but since we have to use video technology to complete these assignments these issues arise. While I was listening to your engaging words, I couldn't help but stare at the fan! Minor distraction!!
Overall, I think you did a great job.
Best Regards,
Suzanna
Hi Arthur,
ReplyDeleteGreat hook, the story grabs my attention. The statistical data you included in your pitch makes it clear that you know what you’re talking about, which entices the person to whom you are pitching to pay attention and seriously consider your proposition. I like that you are building off the future electric vehicle market with an alternative service not yet out there. This service will help to mitigate the learning curve in electric cars for families and seniors who are worried about the unknown, that is, the differences between the cars they’ve been driving with for decades and the new wave of electric or self-driving cars that are unfamiliar at this point in time.
Jonah Brafman
Hello Arthur.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! Your speaking behavior and the content was very professional and I really enjoyed to watch this video. I liked you chose electric vehicle as the topic because electric vehicle industry is on a roll and your presentation was very convincing. I did my elevator pitch but it was hard to act like there's audience in front of me which you did well.
Once again, great post!
Kaito
Hi Arthur!
ReplyDeleteIncredible job on your pitch! I believe that you chose a very promising market and need for your business model. In regards to your performance, you came across very professional and eloquent. I have a lot of trouble keeping my pitches fluid and natural, but you did a great job! I really enjoyed watching your video.
Thanks for posting!
Olivia
Hi Arthur,
ReplyDeleteYour post was excellent about the gas product. I like that you want to give the information to the buyers. You were very calm and reliable in the argument. Don't be that never next time.
Great work.
Hi Arthur,
ReplyDeleteI liked how from the beginning you grabbed everyone's attention bby speaking on how the average individual could save money. What I did notice, though, was that you were speaking very fast. Nonethless, it was obvious that you were very confident with your idea and that is one of the most important aspects of a pitch. You were very persuasive with your approach almost like the perfect salesman.