This is a good speech; however, I believe you may have uploaded the wrong file. This particular post is the exact same pitch, hand gestures, lights, etc. as your first Elevator Pitch #1. In this assignment, Elevator Pitch #3, we were supposed to have been doing a final revision and refinement of the original speech. One of the changes that was suppose to occur between pitch #1 and pitch #3, was to shorten the speech from 90 seconds down to 60 seconds. I am sure you probably accomplished this assignment, but unfortunately the original video file fails to show the progression you have made in your Elevator Pitch. Please, upload the correct video. One option is you could provide the correct YouTube link here in the comments; so that others can watch the appropriate pitch.
Hi Arthur, Great post on the Elevator Pitch Number 3. I like your video was shorter because that means that you have been practicing and got more confidence in the topic. I like your pitch but move more your hand. I fell like you were little nerves. But I believe that you did an excellent job.
Turns out Suzanna is correct. This is the same video file you uploaded for pitch number one. It is a strong pitch, and was one of the best ones I have seen in our group. I still like your idea and believe it has merit as potential in a real-world scenario. You were smart to contact automobile industry professionals in the social capital part of this week’s work.
Hi Arthur,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good speech; however, I believe you may have uploaded the wrong file. This particular post is the exact same pitch, hand gestures, lights, etc. as your first Elevator Pitch #1. In this assignment, Elevator Pitch #3, we were supposed to have been doing a final revision and refinement of the original speech. One of the changes that was suppose to occur between pitch #1 and pitch #3, was to shorten the speech from 90 seconds down to 60 seconds. I am sure you probably accomplished this assignment, but unfortunately the original video file fails to show the progression you have made in your Elevator Pitch. Please, upload the correct video. One option is you could provide the correct YouTube link here in the comments; so that others can watch the appropriate pitch.
Cordially,
Suzanna
Hi Arthur,
ReplyDeleteGreat post on the Elevator Pitch Number 3. I like your video was shorter because that means that you have been practicing and got more confidence in the topic. I like your pitch but move more your hand. I fell like you were little nerves. But I believe that you did an excellent job.
Hi Arthur,
ReplyDeleteTurns out Suzanna is correct. This is the same video file you uploaded for pitch number one. It is a strong pitch, and was one of the best ones I have seen in our group. I still like your idea and believe it has merit as potential in a real-world scenario. You were smart to contact automobile industry professionals in the social capital part of this week’s work.
Jonah Brafman